Thread:ComicMan995/@comment-25737724-20150429172850

I know we've talked about it before, but you might want to start moving some of the really detailed actions to the comic issues. So if this happened in #119 you should put more details in Invincible Vol 1 119 and just put the overall big points in the character bios.

Then when updating bios, you should be putting a reference to the issue where people can read about that info.

So for example:

Eve leaves to notices something wrong with Terra. She calls Mark and he rushes to her room. Eve states that she isn't breathing, worrying the duo about the future. Mark and Eve take Terra and asks around the city to see if anyone knows where a hostipal is. They arrive and are asked to sign paperwork. The doctor arrives and scans Terra, asking what species she is. Eve tells her that she is a Human/Viltrumite hybrid, causing the doctor to refuse her treatment. Mark demands that he does with the doctor complying. They ask to go with him, but the doctor insists that they'll be in the way. They wait in the lobby and Oliver arrives with Haluma. Mark believes that the food is what caused her to get sick and begins to start yelling at Haluma. Haluma defends her herself, commenting that being in a foreign environment could have been the factor. Oliver calms them both and Mark begins to cry, hoping he doesn't lose Terra.

Should really state:

Eve noticed that Terra had stopped breathing. Mark and Eve rushed her to a nearby hospital. While waiting in the lobby for treatment, Oliver and Haluma arrived when Mark began blaming her food. After a heated discussion as to the source of Terra's illness, Mark began crying in grief over the thought of losing her.{reference tag)

What was written in the bio, should go in the actual issue where more details belong. 